Myth

I didn't like that episode but I know where you're going. I've not given this much thought but I'll see what I can come up with.

Day? All day! Can't stand aritifical light. ~Aethel .: Are you real or did someone make you, like a robot?

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * I walked off down the hallway and down a small set of stairs . What do you mean by ‘small ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * When the sign hung over my head, I let hand seductively and luxuriously graze across the metal poles that supported ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * There were no people out this late , which suited him. How about: No one out this late ... The ...

I write by hand and then type it all into Word, by the time I get around to saving it I've added a whole page of stuff that wasn't supposed ...

Maybe about bullying or suicide. I don't think I'd pick it up. Industrial

I've always wanted to write something about Handel, but he kept his personal life private and I have only been able to include him by name, nothing else. Since I ...

When writing about keyboard/controller buttons would you have to capitalise the word? Eg: Tapping the ‘ Send ’ button [...] Aethel pressed ‘ Forward ’. Or does it not matter?

My automatons, I already did that actually. ~Aethel .: What wouldn't you do for money?

Falcon

^ Love that book =] Reading the Ringworld series by Larry Niven.

A pretty girl, has long blonde hair and is about 13 or 14. Pixel

Fluffy

"Tell me, Aethel," the girl began, "did you really get rid of Dill?" "No," Fist clenched tightly, the girl banged on the glass repetitvely. "It wasn't your father. You were ...