Myth

The Pinhoe Egg -- Diana Wynne Jones!

Uh - I don't think so. ~Aethel .: Do you give in easily?

I'm Aethel. Or you can use one of my alias, depending where you're from. Anyone from the Upper Levels can forget me. I'm 24 or something, can't remember but what ...

My youngest brother is the only left-hand writer in he family, even if you counted cousins, etc.

Starlight Express! Love these. Dinah looks much skinnier than her legs do.

“They here?” the one with the swords inquired brusquely of the blonde one. That supposed to be 'they're'? * Hello! One thing I'd like to ask is: why is the ...

Hooray? ~Aethel .: Are you any good at making things? Baking, handcraft, etc.

Hello Trident! The only thing I can point out that came up too often was the mention of 'white', for their clothing you could have given a list instead of: ...

Nice work. Costumes look a bit like pyjamas...

He's cute and love your colour choice.

I died once, that's very close. ~Aethel .: Do you usually have a cloud above your head?

Green = Cooment/Correction Black = Review * He heard the Elementar shift. “Are you all right?” she asked. “I heard you cry out, but the mistress…” Is there a certain ...

Green = Commen/Correction Black = Review * It wasn’t Karoon . Karoon would not have left the job undone a second time. ‘Karoon’ so close together! Maybe replace it with ...

I haven't read all of Jane Austen's work but saw a production of Persuasion , Pride and Prejudice , and Northanger Abbey and they all had these rain scenes. I've ...

The bass-lines were always so thick and heavy that she could feel the sounds reverberate deep in the bones of her chest. I liked that, reminds me of the summer ...