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First one is brilliant, love the rain drops on the petals. I also like the red tree[?] one.

The first is so warm and I love them both, without the guy's distracting head =]

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I don't know. People who know my real name think it is 'Ethel' but it's not. ~Aethel .: Can you keep secrets?

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “I'm not stupid... sweetheart. Why would we make bread at midnight you nutcase ?! ” The elderly lady replied smugly. ...

Nice! Though I think you could have had his top shaded darker, at the moment he looks pretty neutral.

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Hello! The formatting is pretty off, hard to read in some parts, but I can edit it for you if ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The door to the bedroom was open a crack, and Crystal peeked inside to find Alyssa looking through a small ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * And how as the thirteen-year-old, already small for his age, supposed to see past all these fools and find an ...

Thank you all for reading and critiquing! Now: Kitty : This is a one-off so Aethel and Constable will never see each other again. Imp : Those sentences were a ...

Yes, I think so. I just don't write too much description anymore, annoys me to death.

Brilliant! I knew your art reminded me of something: Disney!

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Alya was silent as we flew back to the lookout. I had a smile on my face. When we got there, she sat ...

Hello! I've written a few sketches these past weeks and noticed only one of them had description while the others had hardly enough. Didn't think it mattered much as the ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Babushka had many grandchildren; and she liked to think of them while she painted. I think the beginning sentence sets the scene with ...