Myth

It isn't so bad! Her hair reminds me of vanilla ice cream topping =]

Second one looks much brighter and I love it =]

What kind of a person has fans? Uh - just my author, that's all. ~Aethel .: Are you always right?

Ring

I don't have anything to critique, got here to late, but you should try not to begin every paragraph with 'I', which can be done so easily! I also loved ...

Tolkien

Those new wanton automatons... ~Aethel .: Do you prefer to have long hair or short? Or bald?

Have a girl! Or twins?

I just love how the sun is behind the clouds and all this 'heavenly' glow is showing through.

That is such a pretty place, would love to live there—if possible.

Welcome Jake! YWS is a great place, for all types of writers. See you around =]

Ari, you are so pretty! :D

Hello Nyame! It has been while since I read the first part, went back to it so I could remember the character names. Leslie is just like my brother, he ...

I love Allen's expression! Though Ariel's clothing look a little bland, the colour choice mainly. But still brilliant, can't wait to see the next entry.

The third one doesn't look as good as the first two, and I'd agree with Imp: it looks like Europe.