Myth

All that remained of our faces as we encircled the pit was the shadow that revealed only a dim aura of light; was this reality, or was it truth? Wouldn’t ...

Poor boy. He knew what was going on around him and just wanted to play outside. That is so sad, as I can just imagine him sitting in the chair. ...

I would love for this to continue and don't need to repeat what Niamh and Snoink have said. Description will create images in your readers mind and without them they ...

To the so-called Eclectic, When are you going to stick to your promise? Write more of OP, please. - Monessa .: Hello there Monessa! If your patient then I will, ...

Yay! Thank you very much. It's my first historical fiction piece in like... five years. Eep. It's been too long. XD Five years...? And you write so well. He wanted ...

You're welcome. If you re-post be sure to let me know. :D

Hello there, trident! I'm Myth, one of the 'official' Greeters. If you need anything critiqued be sure to PM me. :D Have a nice day!

Clowns. I really don't like them... ~ Monessa Have you ever invented anything?

Because of the corn I was reminded of Children of the Corn . Michael doesn't like the corns very much does he? And I wouldn't really blame him. You kept ...

I have none. Yet. ~ Monessa Do you hate waiting or are you patient?

“Mistress Neya,” a timid voice called from across the suite. It was her servant Mioka. She turned to look at Mioka immediately; Mioka kneeled and pressed her head into the ...

The torturers hand became a fist just before he felt his throat being choked. There is only one torturer so there should be an apostrophe between r and s: torturer’s. ...

I've just remembered. There was a sci-fi book I read that used first person for a robot and third for other characters. It didn't working with the book though, it ...

Erm, I meant this: Finally, in sixth grade, I attempted my most difficult project yet-writing a historical fiction, forty page novel, located in Denmark during World War II. Due to ...

A book called The House and its Secrets by Algernon Pulney. ~ Monessa What is the worst possible way that someone can humiliate you?