Myth

I write because it is such fun, I like to have new ideas and because I get to be the boss.

I've done this a few times too. It is helpful when you want to word sentences differently.

I can't make up my mind. I would like either a grey wolf or a peregrine falcon. ~ Monessa What are you passionate about?

This essay really got me thinking and kept me reading until the end. There is nothing I would want to change as it is personal to you (am I right?) ...

Green = Comments/corrections Blue = Suggestions Black = Review I have two older brothers, one two older sisters. Take out ‘one’. My two older brothers are twins and will both ...

You have a few typos/spelling mistakes in there that can be found easily. What you have to change, when editing, is to keep your writing in the past tense. There ...

Blue. No green. Um.. I think a rhapsody of dark colours would be right. ~Monessa Have you mastered a certain skill?

I'm more of the "dragon eats the knight and toys with the princess for a while before destroying her kingdom and creating a better one" type. Now that is a ...

Myth, Could I be even more depressed than I already am? Isabel. .: Hello Bel! I didn't make you depressing! Just.. a little curious to what you see and hear ...

CL that is hilarious!

Hello Cool! I'm Myth! Welcome to the site, I'm glad you like YWS and hope you stick around. :wink:

Welcome Anni! You and I both hate Maths and love English/P.E. I don't like books where girls all the time have to talk about dating, going out with guys, breaking ...

Hello Meg! I don't know anyone who loves to write as much as I do so you're not alone there!

I would love to be in Assurbanipal's library in Nineveh at the time when the king was alive. ~Monessa Have you ever seen snow?

Yeah, well done Wiggy! :D