Myth

Pawn

OK that was a quick reply. :P Thanks for looking it over, Wiggy.

One A question had been playing on Calais’ mind for a while. She toyed with her food, involuntarily separating everything into portions. Breakfast was always served at nine and consisted ...

Cold. ~Monessa Wet. ~Calais What colour would you assoiate with yourself?

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Prologue "Would you dare to dream in a world built of dreams?" I like that but there is no need for the prologue. ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Headmaster Tavrinal sat bent over a few sheets of parchment, his feathered quill scratching as he wrote. Gry, you know ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * I looked up; studying the cliffs curiously, as I painfully walked towards them and ignored the course sand that caught between my toes. ...

*gasps and then swoons* Yay! I love Sharpe :P

My favourites.

Yes... Mango. ~Monessa I only ever have apples and I'm fed up of them, I'd like to taste other fruits before I make up my mind. ~Calais What do you ...

I have no one to argue with. Sometimes my pera annoys me but she keeps out of my way when I'm in a mood. ~Monessa Chase Hardy, he's very stupid. ...

addressed Example: None Use it?: Never! This should NEVER be used for said. NEVER. It just... doesn't work. Address means to communicate with a specific subject, and it is never ...

I honestly don't know. ~Monessa An hour, I'm used to Cousin Mildew's punishments. ~Calais What wouldn't you do for money?

Game

I'll use a shield to protect myself, I'm not afraid of things falling. ~Monessa I'll call Cousin Mildew or maybe Wilbur. ~Calais Are you any good at running?