Myth

The feather, unlike the bookmark, doesn't really do much. And the bookmark shows something about you, so maybe you could have had something you'd written yourself rather than a published ...

These seem to have been placed randomly. I do like how you have three forms of playing music: the sheet, a CD and the iPod [or mp3]. Black and white ...

Heaven's Doorway : I actually though there was a door there! Stupid of me to look for it but I love the light shining through on the cross, with a ...

Great going, Clau =]

Hello Brit! What do you like to write? I'm more of a fantasy/sci-fi writer and occasionally go for historical fiction. I used to play sports a lot in my tomboy ...

Seraph Tree : First, his owner says something about a makeover. Is she talking about herself or Felix? She’s referring to Felix. The first line was actually a clue to ...

Colouring Felix [Black] Felix’s witch hadn’t given him a magical talent like all familiars were supposed to have. Lola applied blue lipstick and quick flicks of green eyeliner. “Am I ...

I'm a big sister and I know my mother tells my younger sister to not grow up like me! Harsh. Naturally I liked this and my sister does too. To ...

I didn't really understand what you were trying to say until I got to the last three lines which, for me, would have been great without the other parts.

You might want to check over for typos: 'to' instead of 'too'. I agree with Lizzy, go for something original, make the monster[s] sound scary. I'm old and still afraid ...

It was nice and short. To me this seems perfect for wedding vows.

I love the part about the trees and such pretty words you've used make it something you could read more than once. Also I liked how the first and last ...

It sounds like a short story, a little amusing. Though, in my opinion, perhaps you could have written what the man says in his accent?

1 — I like how you've got the picture to include three different parts: land, sea and sky. And this seems to be the only sunset/sunrise picture I've seen that ...

I can finally see it and it is so pretty. It is so warm and the clouds look like steam. If you wanted to crop it you should cut out ...