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Re: Chapter One of Duty Calls Part Three
Hello! I guess you won’t be posting much more of this since you mentioned publishers. You’ve got something great going here, typos and such let you down so watch out ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One of Duty Calls Part Two
Hello! This is going really well. I especially like the character interactions, they seem so natural rather than forced. Though it does seem strange that they have no security cameras, ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: UPDATED:Chapter 1 of Duty Calls Part One
Hello! When I began reading this Rodax seemed to me to be at least mid- to late-twenties, though he does sound younger, and you’ve pointed out in your prologue he ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: The Prologue to My Book. Duty Calls.
Hello! I’d like to commend you for keeping me reading, usually I skim through prologues but I was able to stay with this because you’ve of your characters and their ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: YWS wallpaper
Love the splatters, but maybe the font colour could be different? Black doesn't look so great.
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Teeth? ~Aethel .: Are you some kind of an alien?
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Imagine? Um... Something hard? ~Aethel .: Would you prefer to die young or old?
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: Kadie's Photoshopping Adventures
I love the middle and last one, the woman doesn't seem out of place at all the way it did whenever I wanted to blend pictures. I'd be nice to ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
It'd be nice if you asked a question... ~Aethel .: When was the last time you had a really good time?
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Horrid Henry & Co.
Has anyone read or watched Horrid Henry? [Writer: Francesca Simon & Illustrator: Tony Ross] I've always loved reading the books and now my younger brothers are interested in them too. ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Love Peace and CHOCOLATE!
Hello! Welcome! My friend used to [and still does] tell me I was great and then I found this site and am a lot better than I was before =] ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Glasses or contacts
I've worn glasses since I was about 10 or 11 but was supposed to get it when I was 9, my parents didn't believe me when I said I could ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Rice is nice. ~Aethel .: Are you missing any teeth?
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Forget The Island, We're Back To The City
Green Means Go : This reminds me of my journey home everyday, the lamppost to the left is a bit distracting other than that the lights seems to take shape ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Planet Hell Pt. 1
Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * A logo reading ‘Rubik’s Cube’ stared up at the man named Tristan from a solid white face. I had to ...
Jan 21, 2008
