Myth

If you want to make this a little believable make sure you add things like how Carla got there and describe what the place looks like—not too much detail but ...

I'll echo MH. To draw your reader in show why this girl would want to run away and how she gets out, she can't simply go out of the door ...

Bookebrithil : Thanks for reading, I'm glad I was able to create the world and not have too much 'info dump'. If you have any other comments I'll appreciate your ...

I don't think I'm better than anyone, sure there are probably plenty of writers out there that would get more fanmail than me but that doesn't mean I have to ...

Number 7 is the best.

I thought the clocks went forward. I didn't really get much time to sleep, too busy writing a few things down.

The Wild Thornberries! I loved that show. - Those troll thingy's with the big purple or pink hair I'd like to forget about those... -Due South -Live and Kicking (as ...

Welcome Jaz! You'll really like it here and if you ever need anything critiqued let me know.

No, mages aren't allowed to have religions. ~Monessa Yes. ~Calais Are you artistic? In what way?

I always thought The Midnight Club was pretty good.

Ask Pros :wink:

Ah well...i can do a poor american accent. Then again, i can't do many. But i can do a spiffing posh accent! :P XD Ach, living in London most people ...

Perhaps it would be better to post as a blog entry, all that hyperness.

Tannar, Okay... autographs from a character. Thanks and I hope to read more about you, we both should pester Gry. Myth. .: Tannar, I never thought you were the immature ...

Welcome! You've choosen the perfect time to join, Mr Devil :wink: