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I've written tons of fantasy without using a prologue, expect for one piece that really needed it. Prologues get on my nerves unless they are important and tell the reader ...

How would you go about describing the sound of a synthesiser to someone who has never heard it before? I've got 'wailing' written down but that doesn't seem right. Any ...

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The moon glowed crimson in the ominous sky. Sorry to say this but that isn’t the best way to start: ...

Ari : I used a regular black ballpoint pen on a scrap oiece of paper. Fish : Which is why I need to make her scarier XD Or perhaps the ...

I actually liked this, all of it is so true unfortunately. Nothing to add that would help you improve it apart from the typos I noticed — 'no' instead of ...

Inspired by the punks all over town =]

Any thoughts on a penguin that I've neglected for the past few months?

These are fantastic, I especially love the book. Wish I knew what the words meant.

Hello! Welcome to the site! You'll love it here soon enough. Sci-Fi and fantasy? I like them too.

Are you going to colour this? Please do! It looks so bgreat already but some colour would give it a more appealing look. Always great to see your work.

Death of a Naturalist -- Seamus Heaney The Waste Land -- TS Eliot Kid -- Simon Armitage All I have on mind right now.

I'm glad you didn't put the something they're reaching for in. Leaves us to our own imagination. I love the girl's expression, she seems so bored and just the jumble ...

Dear Lord! I really should update. Thank you for your comment and taking time to look through this abandoned section =]

Try writing a sketch, so you can get to know your characters--one for each if possible. I also was going to suggest Snap's idea. Write the parts you can visualise ...

This sounds like something that would turn out to be a brilliant novel. Each stanza has its own meaning, putting them together creats the story. I especially loved: —and I ...