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Welcome back Gal! I love the tattoo.

I appreciate any help I can get as everyone has a different point of view. Thanks Mlle Fish =]

It looks like he's in pain... And the muscle on his back, the bumpy parts, look random. The eyes don't look very lion-ish unless you were going for a cartoon ...

Welcome! I think the difference would be: DA mostly consists of artists with literary thrown in and YWS is the other way round. Anyway, do you write or are you ...

Oh shiny. This is a very pretty poem to read. I love the images coming to mind of autumn and particularly love the second stanza.

Is there more to come? I would love to read further especially since Lyle doesn't like humans but we don't know why becuse you plungd the reader into a scene ...

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * It was as pale as the moon that shown in the window. Was the ‘shown’ supposed to be ‘ shone ...

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * It all seemed [s]so incredibly[/s] the same. The parts cut out didn’t do the sentence any good. All the fueling ...

I notice you like to make the ending line in your poems bold. is there a reason for that? To me it seems the last line really tells the story: ...

I liked the idea of having two speakers in the poem and the italics actually helped to separate the grandchild and grandfather. But you didn't really put anything in to ...

You inked Kat's drawing! I can see it much better now. I especially love the armour.

Thank you! Wish I thought more like you, I was going for 'wailing of a strangled cat' which is no good. Windwipers make the strangest noises, I'll have to sit ...

I love the black and white photo, so pretty and the flowers beneath that. The pond is so nice, I wish I could sit there all on a golden afternoon ...

Thanks Meep, I'll look into it.

Thanks all. She wasn't meant to be cute to begin with. I'll upload the rest when I've had time to redraw them.