Myth

I haven't seen the old Battlestar, but the 'new' seasons look great so far. I love how all their papers and boards are octagonal and the name of their planets.

Hello! Nice going so far. Myth

Sophie cast him a withering glare in reply […] They are almost the same thing, so maybe just use one of them? "I saw the tear, but never dwelt on ...

1 — The shadow is very distracting, it looks as if your fingers got in the way when you took took the picture. I'd suggest darkening and perhaps blurring the ...

Hello! To be honest I thought this was going to be something about suicide and almost didn’t continue reading, but I liked the way it turned out they weren’t actually ...

I like it. Two things to point out: Trinity's lips look odd and it seems you cut Neo out of another picture since his right side doesn't blend with Morpheus's ...

Hello! I think this is too short. The reader doesn't get a feel of the atmosphere or connect with any of the characters--you have twenty to work on and the ...

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Ch. 1 It sounded like another little rebellion [s]began[/s] had begun , this time in the kitchen. ^^^ See quote ...

Hello Kadie! Sometimes it's your cover letter that counts, people will decide to look at--or skim--your CV if the cover letter is good enough. Good luck job hunting, I only ...

I wouldn't call Harry Potter a trilogy. So did you get your dog on Christmas? =] And what are the awards for: prose, poetry?

Numkbers one to four are my favourite, the others didn't really draw my interest. For number three you could crop to get rid of the building, or go back there ...

A straw hat that's just the right size. ~Aethel .: What makes your head[s] spin?

I love numbers four and five, they make me feel sleepy and remind of our local library, number four looks really great in black and white.

Compared to those green pebbles that fish is tiny! And very pretty pretty colours. I'd suggest cropping it so you don't really see anything outside the bowl.

Really shocking. He always looked so cheeky.