Mysty

Right off I was confused about this. I think a lot of it was you have a lot of non-sequiturs, that is, a statement that doesn't lead into the next. ...

I think it's obvious you're going somewhere with this, but some of the language is very distracting. For instance, when you say "sensitive orbs." Not everyone will know what you ...

Yep, I post on inkpop. Or rather, I used to. I deleted my account :) But a previous draft of this was top five for... March, I think. And thanks ...

I can't remember exactly what my first story was, but I know I wrote it in first grade; the teacher made us write a bunch of things and then bound ...

Starting to query so AL is down. :)

Thanks XD Like I said, you can call me either. Mysty's just an online name I've been using for a few years now.

I'm doing JulNo :D I'm... not TECHNICALLY a day behind, but I haven't done my writing for today. I'll probably get to it this evening. I hope.

I'm Mysty (or Joana; that's my real name). I'm nineteen, a creative writing student at college and have been writing for years. I pretty much migrated over from after deciding ...