MysticalBlood

hi, welcome to young writers society, how did you find it? I found it by searching on google! Well, hope you enjoy it here, everyone will make you feel welcome, ...

Photographs placed in your mind from vivid imagery Of all the poems you have read and remembered Every time you think of a poem Mine will come to mind Just ...

I touch his soft red rosy lips, Trace the pattern with my finger tips, He grins at me and stokes my cheek, All handsome kind and totally sleek, His eyes ...

since you all wanted me to change it, then I have: I touch his soft red rosy lips, Trace the pattern with my finger tips, He grins at me and ...

They are very good, especially the positions you took them at, my dad like taking pics so maybe I'll show him them, very good, the silhouette feature is brill! Well ...

This is really cute! You could add paws reaching out like he was running or something like that, it is really cute! Also love cross eyed look to the snowflake! ...

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hello! Everyone is kind here, I am new too and I got some help on two poems I have posted in the other section, you get help on anything you ...

Hello there! everyone here is friendly and will point out any mistakes you have made in poetry, stories, novels you have wrote! So be sure to look out for a ...

Dear iCarlyfan had you read what is posted above, you would know that this is what is known as a french sonnet, and that for this type of sonnet there ...

hello, welcome to the young writers forums, i'm sure you'll enjoy it here, eveyones kind and supportive, we try to help out with peoples poems stories and novels, so be ...

Sonnets should have a ten syllable beat each line, I thought there was to begin with, but then it ruined it by too many syllables, try deleting some stuff. like: ...

Ok, how does this sound? When I see your eyes, There is nothing to despise, But all those boyish lies, Makes me see you're a fool, certainly nobodies. Is that ...

^_^ Hey, Lizzie. I think it was Lizzie, right? Oh, forgive me if I'm wrong. D: Anyways, after reading this through ONCE I get a really nice image. I can ...

WOW, that is really good, it rhymes well, there is a good rhythm to the song and it'd be nice if we could hear the song. It gives out a ...