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MysteryMe

My novel

The first chapter of a novel that I started to write this summer. I won't post the rest of it, I just want some feedback on my writing style and some constructive criticism.
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    This is the first chapter of a new novel I started this summer. I won't post the rest of it, I just needed some feedback on my writing style and more.

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Me personally if my grandma got replaced by a wolf i think i would clock it pretty fast
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