Myriadne

You have a lovely fluid style that reminds me of Tennyson. I like fear the best because it just flows so well and conveys your meaning expertly, I didint like ...

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This sounds like a greeting card, I don't mean it in bad way :) I just mean that you express your feelings so simply and sweetly :) I think maybe ...

It is true, not minimal perse, but a piece should not be overly adjective or adverb heavy. It simply goes back to the old adage "show don't tell" Instead of ...

This is interesting and has good intentions. However I do feel that the rhyme scheme is a bit forced, and the repetition of the rhetorical question does tire quickly. It ...

Elegant. you called me that day you said I smelled like silk does silk smell? wafting at you as you walk d'you inhale and think mmmmm silk. Like others sniff ...

"We should go." With that he turned away from the deceptive scene below and walked down t he path wihich led to the base of the cliff. Audra glared, Always ...

Somtimes when you're felling "blocked" or fuzzy a good thing to do is to find a piece of writing by an author you like and write something about a different ...

I like this a lot. The first two stanzas are magic. I also really like what you are saying in the third stanza, however it does feel a bit disjointed. ...

Well in New Zealand we got rid of 1Cent and 2 Cent coins aeons ago. However the debate is now whether we should get rid of the 5 cent coin, ...

Very nice! Theres just one line that reads a little clumsily to me, for embolden throughout your body It just doesn't seem quite right. Otherwise I enjoyed this greatly :)

Oooh well done, yes you are right. In both cases, thats why I stopped becoming particularly active there. I still drop buy every now and then, but its not the ...

The whole cocaine thing was part of the fact Coca Cola was originally marketed as a patent medicine, difficult to believe but its true. Back in 1885 cocaine was quite ...

Nice place you've got here Nate, you may (or most probably may not) remember me as Starlight from TYWC.