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Re: The Best Way to Improve Your Poetry
Ditto. You should read good poetry, bad poetry, and boring poetry. Everything. You have to be able to comprehend what your reading too. It''ll help improve the clarity in which ...
Feb 20, 2009 -
Re: Um, Hello!
HEy there Smith! That was quiet the introduction. I'm relatively new here,too. And I absolutely love it. It's a great place to be around people that are just like you, ...
Feb 20, 2009 -
Re: Your Getaway Car for Real Feelings
Wow. Amazing work!! I really enjoyed reading this. I honestly couldn't find anything really wrong with it. I loved the emotional intensity and it is extremely powerful when read out ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Wanted
I never claimed that I was perfect. In fact, I know that I was the polar opposite. But you Pressured and pressured, Wanted me to be like all those you ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: I Crashed and I Crumbled
With my head hung low And my fingers stretching forward I was begging the world to take me Not understanding the sudden change in speed I gripped onto the closest ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Twelve Thousand Things I Want To Say
Niiiece wooork. I liked the concept, but I think there are a few things that could make this even better. The entire poem seems to rushed for the idea your ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Perfection
Perfect is just a word, But it causes so much pain. Pressure, yet another word That I look on with disdain. Aching, I criticize myself, Because I am not good ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: The Music
Put on the music and forget everything you've done Dance until you fall and don’t regret anything you've done "Don't cry we did it only for your good" Just wash ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Tasting the Air
Thank you so much everyone for commenting on my poem! I don't think you could ever understand how much I appreciate it. :D Thank you, thank you, a million times.
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: A little time
I really like the idea.It's interesting. My advise would be to treat this dog character like you would any human character. ---Give the dog a personality ---Add some visuals in ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Perfect (REVISED)
Good job! :D I really liked the concept and the imagery in this. It was like you were slowly painting a picture in my mind using your words. But I ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Stand Still
At a stand still. Just waiting. For the judgment What will you decide? Yes, it took some time. But we know better now No longer blinded . No longer deaf. ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Tasting the Air
Tasting the air with my tongue. I stood right here when I lost someone. So long ago, but it smells just the same. Wading through depths while I sung. Hoping ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Lions
Thank you so much for the reviews. :D. It means the universe to me. Haha. And it is meant to be a song, Becca. I did the newbie thing and ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Lions
We’re sleeping with the lions tonight Just don’t let them catch us looking into their eyes I promise they’ll find a reason to take us, break us and eat us ...
Jan 27, 2009
