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Sorry if the formatting throws you off or anything. This is the first time I've submitted a song, well in the right category anyway. :D Tell me what you think, ...

Wow. I really really liked this. Nice job. I gave you a star! It's so incredibly amazing, really. My only critique and this isn't a critique at all. Is to ...

AWw. This was so sweet. I loved it. Listen to the whispers that dance across your face; watch them breeze past you as they continue on their race. Invisible yet ...

This poem had some nice parts, but it is overdone to the point that I can't recognize your writing style and I only vaguely know what your talking about. Important ...

I really like this. It's so sassy. And screams at you in a way. Very Very Good. You have a very unique style. I have nothing critical to say except ...

HAHA. That made me laugh. Especially that last line. "Should I be concerned?" LMAO.

I loved this so much. It was so pretty and sweet. The only thing that I would suggest is gong back and making sure the rhythm in the last stanza ...

Whoa. Thank you so much everyone for commenting. I really didn't expect such a response and it means a lot to me. :D By the way 200397---the type of poem ...

It is in the nature of the lies we speak. Falling into murky liquid pools. Permanence of the deception at its peak. Deaf to the silence, which was amended with ...

Wow. This was beautiful. I don't know exactly how you did it, but the way you wrote this poem or maybe it is just your all sounded like a whisper ...

I really like this. It was niiiice.LOL. This is inspired by the Salem Witch Trials a little isn't it?..sounds like it anyway. The only real fault that I noticed is ...

Only in the darkness can I say what I feel. Only alone can I see that you are real. You make feel insignificant. Like a speck of dust; floating away ...

Don't knock on yourself so much. :D Especially since you really are good. And also because if you keep talking about how bad it is it makes people not want ...

With the wave of your hand you say So what? Tomorrow this will all blow over. Well I've got some news for you. Yesterday's tomorrow is today and your still ...

Nice job! I really liked the idea but thought that it was a little bit rough. Like it should be edited more. And be a little more specific in a ...