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reserving a spot!!!!!! *P.S, this is fictionfanatic on my friends account*

thanks fic. Tyler: The scientist told me to go to some testing and I gave him a smart allec comment. He grabbed me by the shirt adn said angrily "I'm ...

I'll join!!! Name: Tyler Gender: Male Appearance: Tyler has hair that is such a dark red, it's almost black. He has smooth, pale skin and big emerald green eyes (the ...

Name: Rosemary Age (real):( 60-160) 60 Age (fake): (15-17) 17 Position: (setter, server, middle back, ect.) Middle Blocker Picture: Personality: Rosemary is really competitive because she used to have

First-I'm a huge twilight fan. Second-This is almost an exact replica of Breaking Dawn. Get married young, two weeks of the honey moon, blames it on food, leaves early in ...

I just want to say that the whole secret garden, heavy key thing has been done before. Haven't you ever heard of The Secret Garden? It's both a movie and ...

This chapter is very smushed. There isn't any room. You crammed every detail you could into four paragraphs. It's a bit of an overload. This story has potential, just draw ...

“Your parents are murdered!” This should be "Your parents were murdered." And the exclamation mark doesn't fit. You also have some misspelled words. Other than that this is an okay ...

This is kind of a sad poem, but that's why I like it. You caught my attention, which is good, and you kept it. This is a good peice.

This is pretty good. I especially like how you introduced it. Now, I'm not one for philosophy but it caught my attention. I don't know if it's because I like ...

I like the descriptions that you use, in both this chapter and the last. And it's not everyday that you see a story about a gay romance, so that's good.

I agree that this chapter is done better than the prologue was. She was the one who grabbed my arm and pulled me on stage with a piece of paper, ...

Prologue The swishing sound of my heart and my heavy, uneven breaths were a constant reminder. A reminder that something was wrong. Four years ago I was diagnosed with CHF, ...

Kyle: Once we met up with the guys one of them just started hugging us all. He seemed kind of sweet. He was complimenting one of the girls hair. I ...

Can we start now?