MyDaddyIsSuperman

Okay, first of all. I'm already singing this. It's very haunting for me, it feels as though a group of men are marching towards their death, all singing this haunting ...

If I had enough skin, I would tattoo this to myself. Instead, I will settle for imprinting this into my mind. This piece has a very haunting feel to me. ...

This is very interesting and brilliantly written. I loved your word choice, especially when describing the surroundings, it immediately brings images to the mind, rather than making the reader think ...

Chapter 1 -- The Tunnels Kip, the Golden, was quick to grab Rae by the shoulder and yanked the White Stolen up into a standing position. As soon as both ...

This is a very interesting start. I was very interested in the story and where it was headed next. The only advice/suggestion I can give you is to back through ...

Thank you guys so much for the reviews! @Mistie, thank you for your input but have no fear, the way the prologue is written is much different than the chapters ...

That was beautiful in a very heartbreaking way. Thank you so much for sharing it. I will be sure to check out more of your works.

PROLOGUE Leave tonight or live and die this way. We called them the Enigma. We had no idea what they were or what they wanted. All we knew is that ...