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I'll have to try it some times, but I do have anger issues, so it may come across to me the same way it did Krupp. xD Either way, I ...

They waltzed crisply, hiding their affections. She smoothed her dress and left. She leaped gracefully to her death. Then one day, he stopped looking.

Hello, darlings! Music here to teach you about compound sentences. Now, I'm sure you all know about them, but I've seen so many mistakes with these lately! What is a ...

Mmm. Angel has a good point- the girl, hopefully, isn't obsessive about her object of affection. She could, though, every once and a while, have thoughts come in her mind ...

Wow, Blink! It sounds interesting! I usually don't like this type of stuff, but... yeah! Haha. One thing I noticed: Belring + Communism + destroy the wall = Making Music ...

Mmm. I think that your MC could appear friendly to the EOW at first, but be a little cold to her at times. Kind of a "frenemies" thing going on. ...

I did that. I didn't realize it at first, but my friends kept saying, "She's just like you!" I finally noticed that we had many things in common, but some ...

I've encountered the same problem, Sakura. I've found myself so focused on critiquing that I barely write in my novel anymore. But I'm just getting started here at YWS. I'll ...

You, sir, are officially awesome. Thanks for this!

Thanks for the help. I really wanted to work on my dialogue. :)

PM's good for me if it's good for you, Shini. :)

I'd be happy to help!

Only my close friends and parents know that I'm writing a novel at the moment. (At least I hope so.) I've told people that I want to be an author ...

"Why?" she sobbed through convulsive tears.

Love intrigued her. She desired it.