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Camryn: After David gave orders to everyone, I nodded towards him, showing my consent. I would be carrying three partials: Stanley, the ferret, and the white tiger twins, Josh and ...

Hello! Here as requested. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: Lots of tree[s]’[/s]s. I didn’t mind, in fact, forests and hidden places appealed to me greatly. Moving to Canada was my ...

Hello, darling! Music here. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: After breakfast[s],[/s] and a shower I [s]leave[/s] left (

Camryn: "Brainless fish?" I growled. My entire body tensed, ready to transform. I breathed deeply. I was not going to fight over him, of all people. "Who are you, anyway?" ...

Okay bolt. Camryn: "Tonight," David grinned as he walked away. So he'd finally gotten his act together. I smiled to myself as I walked back in the gym, leaving Red ...

**Oh wow, three pages overnight, I think. Um, could someone bring my character in? And remember he works for the scientists.** You could technically go in on my last post, ...

All done with Eraqio's. :D

Okay Then the when caught in the act could still be there, so the other group gets stuck, runs away Fro the guards and find my group,and then they escape ...

Camryn: Well, okay then. I guessed she thought I was some tender little girl. Well, I wasn't about to fight her for being bitter. That's the way things worked. It ...

So, wait... If there's two escaping groups, then is there going to be a group that stays?

I'm just continuing in the gym. Let me know if there's a problem with that. :wink: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Camryn: I walked into the gym, searching for a familiar face. I saw ...

That sounds like a good plan. I just know that I have to carry a bunch of people. :)

Hi! Here as requested. Well, as the above reviews noted, this piece gave wonderful imagery. I loved it from the start, and the first line was probably my favorite. :) ...

Hi! Music- here as requested! (I'm not too great at poetry, but I'll give yours a try!) Okay, so the poem really made me think. You should know that. I ...

Camryn: Hmm. So he'd considered it, too. Maybe the guy actually had a brain. I paused for a moment, eying him cautiously. "Yeah, I'm in." "Good. So, who else do ...