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Re: Write or Die
I'll have to try it some times, but I do have anger issues, so it may come across to me the same way it did Krupp. xD Either way, I ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 2 Chapter 3
Hi Falls! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I, on the other hand, think they are [s]in - convenient[/s] inconvenient . I have to hover about the house now , because most ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: 6 Word Stories
They waltzed crisply, hiding their affections. She smoothed her dress and left. She leaped gracefully to her death. Then one day, he stopped looking.
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: I Saw the Red
Hi Jared! Wow, I really liked this piece! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: They were idiotic to try and pack their clothing, homes and sanity into what little they could carry.
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Crystalline - Chapter One, Part Two
Hi, Ariani! Music back for round two, my darling. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: “You did What ?”
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Let me be {1}
Hello, darling! So sorry this took forever to review! *feels bad* Anyway, onto the critique! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: My eyes were distracted [s]to[/s] by Callie, who was babbling about ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Sweet tears, and Chaos. Part 1 of Chapter 3.
Hi, Falls! Music here. :D Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: "Wait a minute, are you like. . . friends with her? I mean , don't get me wrong , dude , ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste Discussion Thread
Hmm, that sounds pretty good. Or Ringo and Cam could separate, since Ringo was really making Cam angry, and one would run into the group, and the other would eventually ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Make Music happy. Give her something to review!
Meep's is done. Lovely story. :D
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Seven Letters
Eep, a request! I'm... honored! :smt044 Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I held your hand as we said our final goodbyes. They are as soft as they were when I first ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Seven Letters
Eep, a request! I'm... honored! :smt044 Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I held your hand as we said our final goodbyes. They are as soft as they were when I first ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Seven Letters
Eep, a request! I'm... honored! :smt044 Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I held your hand as we said our final goodbyes. They are as soft as they were when I first ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste Discussion Thread
Hmm, where do Light_Devil and I come into all of this? I'd like for Cam to meet up with Red, David, and Phillip again. And we can bring Ringo (LD) ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: New JMs! June, Sachiko, Clo, Jiggity, Kylan, and Demeter!
*Toots horn* Yay! Congrats, guys! You all deserve it!
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 2 Chapter 2.
Hi, Falls! Music here. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: You had a few issues with your grammar: Journal entries: Journal entry. Tuesday 30th, May. I’m not really sure how but ...
Apr 16, 2009