Musicaloo7311

Hi! I'm not really confident in reviewing poetry, but oh, well. :oops: I liked this poem! I was intrigued by how you used figurative language to describe some types of ...

Here as requested, my darling! Vashoa stared out over the large space[s],[/s] - empty, except for some shrubs and rivers she called home. Vashoa started back to the old, ramshackle ...

Hello, darling! I'm Music, and I'll be reviewing this piece [obviously]. Anyway, I see you're new here! Welcome to YWS! I suggest you head to the Welcome forum and post ...

*pouts* I might not be able to go! I have a camp thing that day right after school.

I'll get on those as soon as I can! I've actually already done the first one! Hehe.

To Fire: I know it's Tae Kwon Do, I'm in it, too. I just call it karate. Haha.

Peyton- Traveler Peyton's smiles turned down into an expression of bewilderment. "You mean...I- I thought you knew. Doesn't everyone know what's in Mexico?" Hmm. What the heck is he doing ...

Oops, I posted twice. Check out the one below Moonlight's. :wink:

Hello, darling! I'll review overall for prologue and chapter 1 and edit grammar for chapter one [since everyone else did the prologue.] :) [s]My throat was so dry with all ...

Hiya! I hadn't noticed there was a preface. :oops: I'll review this now. I'm here to do grammar and overall for you, Kat, buddy. :) [To quote "The Dark Knight"] ...

Hiya! I'm here to edit grammar and give my opinions on said poem. :) Suddenly , I fell . [s]d[/s]Darkness came over me like a black blanket . It suffocated ...

Hey, Tennis! Here's my critique: :) Daddy - where are you? It feels like hours outside the grubby outlet mall , singing in collosal snowbanks Natasa and I . [s]i[/s] ...

Hiya! Hmm. Not much to say on these. But I shall nag you by saying that for every time you post your work, you need to review two pieces by ...

Bird

I love putting quotes or things I think of randomly on my signature. And I have a link to my "Will Review For Food" thread. :) Song lyrics are awesome, ...