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Re: The Outcasts
Kale- Power: Electric current down her arms Kale smiled again. "I'm sure there's more of us. I'm sorry you're getting upset; I'm sick of it, too. Sometimes I just wish ...
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Re: The Outcasts
Kale- Power: Electric current down her arms Kale looked at the ground once again. "Ohh, I'm not sure. A month or two? It's been such a blur..." She trailed off ...
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Re: The Oval Portrait
Hiya! I'm Music, and I'll be your reviewer today. The yellowed light that fell through the window cast shadows that stretched to the corners of the room. [s]Teh[/s][b]The artist picke ...
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Re: Spring is in the Air
Hey! I'm Music! 1.) I loved this first one; it's my favorite. I just adore the striking image of the proud, vivid purple against the soft and serene green. Great ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: It'll Be Okay
Hi, darling. First of all I want to let you know this is a wonderful poem. I'm going to help with the punctuation. :) She holds her child close, clutched ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: It'll Be Okay
Hi, darling. First of all I want to let you know this is a wonderful poem. I'm going to help with the punctuation. :) She holds her child close, clutched ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Another of my art influenced by flowers
Hi, Shauni! Music here. Okay, let's start with the flower itself: This was my favorite part of the drawing. I loved the detailed petal work. Have you found out what ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Fake, or Real?
Music here- as requested. Planning to do a complete grammar, spelling, and what not check and then overall impressions. :) Police were patrolling the building ' s perimeter, searching, guarding, ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: 2012
Peyton- Traveler Peyton smiled towards Steven as she thought to herself. Hah, the idiot. And on his own? Is he implying I can't fight? That sexist... Get a hold of ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: I trip over sidewalks
Hiya, Sock! I'm Music. I'll review your grammar for you. :) I trip over sidewalks[s],[/s] ; I trip over plants . I trip over pebbles and the hem of my ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: The Desert Needs The Rain
Hey, Voice! Music here. Here to critique, that is. I loved this song. It was beautiful yet melancholy. Sadly, I haven't heard "You are Everything", so I didn't exactly know ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: New Day
Hello, niteowl! I'm afraid I'm no poet expert, but I shall try and give a helpful review. I actually like the phrase "believing it to be" in the poem better ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Maybe Skies Are Blue
Hiya, Bittersweet. I'm reviewing you (it's kind of obvious by now), and my name's Music. Nice to meet ya. On to the poem. Hehe. As erratik noted, I thought it ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Burn The Books
Hey, Pink. I'm Music and I'll be reviewing you today! My favorite stanza was probably the repeating one: Burn the books! Smoke the ashes! Dissolve the traces! Of their disease! ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: SPEW Trailer
Epic win. :) Although, it is spelled Black Cat Sachiko, I think. :wink: Pretty darn awesome trailer, once I got over the caps. Hehe. Love, Music. :)
Mar 10, 2009
