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Hi! I'm Music, a.k.a. your grammar stickler for today. :wink: Quivering, quaking, quiet heart, Creating waves in every part, And shaking me from inside out . My brains calls out, ...

Hi, Claeren! I'm Music. The snow falls down, Purest white. It flutters down, Out of the sky. Landing softly, Not a sound. While all are sleeping, Unaware[s]s[/s]. All except a ...

My dad's insane about Alexis. I'm still holding strong for Megan and Adam. Although, I like Danny, too.

*runs up to Evi* Evi, darling! I just wrote my first free verse and my longest poem ever. Help. I didn't pay attention to the rhythm schemes or anything. I ...

Thanks. In my other poems I've posted, they rhymed and had line lengths I was careful about. For this one, I focused more on the story. I really didn't pay ...

Hi, darling! Music here to give my grammar corrections and overall impressions! It didn’t matter where I turned. It didn’t matter where I was. It [s]defiantly[/s] definitely didn’t matter if ...

Edited version! This is the tale of a girl known as Dancer. Ever since she was small, she danced. Her parents and loved ones were in awe; they knew she ...

Hi, Vivacious! I'm Music, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. :) Extend my hand, Biting my lip, I reach . . . Who says it’s that bad? Is it ...

Hi! I'm Music. I'll be critiquing you today. I thought it was a pretty good poem for a beginner! Nice concept. Like the other reviewer before me, I liked the ...

Hi, Hannah! I'm Music and I'll be your reviewer today. :) Silken birds in crystal trees sway back and forth in waxen breeze preserved with trace of antique rain. Pale ...

Hello, darling! Here to review for you. :) First, let's see about the grammar: Drifting into dreamland, Staring at the sky, I know there’s some reason; Still I wonder why. ...

Hey! I'm Music. Umm, here's my review. :) Grammar: When all is said and done, who can say they've won? The bodies lying in the streets, the blood flowing beneath ...

Kale- Power: Electric current down her arms Kale laughed nervously. "Yeah, what are two young teenage girls doing out in the woods by themselves? I'm sure we'll find someone."

Hiya, darling! I'm Music. A camera can be a single moment, [s]A[/s] a single memory. Only capitalize when you begin a sentence.:wink: A camera can catch a lifetime of smiles, ...

Hiya, darling! I'm Music. A camera can be a single moment, [s]A[/s][b]a single memory. Only capitalize when you begin a sentence.:wink: A camera can catch a lifetime of smiles, [s]A[/s] ...