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Evi, dear! *hugs* Wonderful story. You managed to include her whole situation so you didn't leave the reader wondering, until the very end when you stop at the climax. (I ...

Hi, Damsel! I'm Music. Yes, your pictures are worth looking at, silly darling! 1.) Like anti-pop, I'm a sucker for waterfalls. I really liked this one. The subject is beautiful. ...

Hi! I'm Music. No corrections or advice? Okay. *zips lips* Overall, I really quite enjoyed this poem! I thought it flowed nicely. The ending stanza captured how awkward deep conversation ...

Hi, Peyton! Music here. Again. :) One nit-pick before I do overall. Can’t put them down, far to o hard. I thought the concept of this poem was nice. The ...

Hi! I liked this poem. It flowed really well and showed YWS a little love! That's what it needs. :wink: No nit-picks on grammar, spelling, etc. Odd for me not ...

Hi! It's Music! :) The sound of elegant[s],[/s] ball gowns swishing together and boring, steady [s]sound of[/s] waltz music was [s]the sound[/s] what I heard as I arrived at the ...

Bye, LilyJamey! I hope to see you back soon! *hugs*

Hi! I'm Music. So a collage-poem, eh? I'm about to have to do one for my English class. I thought this one was composed pretty well! A nit-pick: [s]Trun[/s] Turn ...

Hi there! I'm Music, and I'll be reviewing you today. :wink: Generally , this curse disfigures the princess in one way or another, or it sends her into a long ...

Hi, Stoney! I'm Music! Okay, some rules to lay down here: 1.) Here at YWS (which I'm so glad you've joined, by the way), we have a thing known as ...

Kale- Power: Electric current down her arms "I think that's a good idea. I'm so tired of being alone!" Kale groaned and then smiled at Kayla again. "Which way do ...

I've posted the edited version! Thanks for all of your helpful comments. :)

Hi! I'm Music. I really liked the description here! Great job. I could picture it perfectly. One nit-pick: These are the days of yesterday, today, tomorrow—three days and many years ...

Hi, Romance! I'm Music, here to review for you today. :) I watched her as she walked gracefully towards the huge, wooden double doors of Cuthbert Hall, with her head ...

Shina! I haven't talked to you in forever! Remember when I was new and you helped me out... Aww, memories. Haha. Anyway, I'm reviewing your poem today. (Duh.) Haha. You ...