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Re: Make Music happy. Give her something to review!
Colleen's is done. (:
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Monday [iii]
Hannah, darling! Sorry it took me so long! My internet is back and fully recovered. :) Grammar: My pencil scratched against the answer sheet for the full time [s]alloted[/s] allotted ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Redemption [1.2]
Music, here as requested, my darling! Grammar: Shane smiled to himself, walked off the track[s],[/s] and up the bleachers. Nathan ran up to him. "Amazing," he sighed. "No words can ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Are You Excited?
I don't know what for, but yes !
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Disaster: Prologue
Hello, Eliza! I'm Music. :) Grammar: “I can’t , Java; it wouldn’t be right,” Mike sighed... First they had become dry as if he was stranded on land, then they ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: Disaster: Prologue
Hello, Eliza! I'm Music. :) Grammar: “I can’t , Java; it wouldn’t be right,” Mike sighed... First they had become dry as if he was stranded on land, then they ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: Disaster: Prologue
Hello, Eliza! I'm Music. :) Grammar: “I can’t , Java; it wouldn’t be right,” Mike sighed... First they had become dry as if he was stranded on land, then they ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: Dream
Hello! Music here to critique your "Dream". :) Grammar: [s]It was the only sound in the room that I could hear.[/s] It was the only perceptible noise in the room. ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Dream
Hello! Music here to critique your "Dream". :) Grammar: [s]It was the only sound in the room that I could hear.[/s] It was the only perceptible noise in the room. ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Dream
Hello! Music here to critique your "Dream". :) Grammar: [s]It was the only sound in the room that I could hear.[/s] It was the only perceptible noise in the room. ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Too Much of Myself
I did that. I didn't realize it at first, but my friends kept saying, "She's just like you!" I finally noticed that we had many things in common, but some ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
Via, that is terrible. I'm so sorry you had to go through that. Congratulations on being brave enough to write it out; I hope it brought you comfort or clarity ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Difference [1]
Music here to critique for you! Grammar: [alexandria] Cat, darling, capitalize this, you silly girl! Oh , no “It’s been a year.” Can it be year ? :wink: “Maybe she ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Make Music happy. Give her something to review!
Colleen's is finished. :) It was good, by the way.
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Difference [1]
Music here to critique for you! Grammar: [alexandria] Cat, darling, capitalize this, you silly girl! Oh , no “It’s been a year.” Can it be year ? :wink: “Maybe she ...
Mar 25, 2009
