-
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
Oh, darlings! I meant for this to be a short story, not something to be continued! I really appreciate the critiques, you guys!
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Play On.
Hi! I'm Music- here to critique for you today. :) Grammar: “Music [Hey- that's me!] makes one feel so romantic – at least it always gets on one’s nerves – ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Past the Horizon
Ooh! I'm intrigued as well! Did you mean to not punctuate, though? That bothered me- just a bit. I really liked the idea of using a poem-sort-thing as your prologue. ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Bye Bye YWS
Kat! *snuggles* When I saw the title, I thought, Kat's leaving? Wha? No! But, it's only for a week! Thank goodness! Cute, quirky little poem! Hope to see you back ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when while all of your classmates are grumbling about the one writing prompt your Language Arts teacher assigned you, you're annoyed that she hasn't given ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
Oh, dear! I guess I made a lot more mistakes than I thought I did! Haha. I should have known, considering I wrote it under a heavy lack of sleep ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Do You Get It?
I get it!
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
I sighed and looked up from my book to take another sip of my frappachino. I couldn't concentrate on studying for my history test; I was too annoyed by the ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Evil Other Woman
Mmm. I think that your MC could appear friendly to the EOW at first, but be a little cold to her at times. Kind of a "frenemies" thing going on. ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Last Date.
Hello! I'm Music. :) Grammar: She says: -Fine. But we have to talk about it eventually. Very interesting approach to writing dialogue. I don't necessarily like it. the first paragraph ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: A Return to Peace
I didn't know there was a prologue! *smacks head* Grammar: When I was born, my mother died. One of the things I commented on in your first memory was that ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: A Return to Peace (The First Memory)
Yay! I just love reviewing your romances, darling! [How's "My Only Sunshine" doing, by the way? :)] Grammar: With that , I stood and walked away down the street, feeling ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Chapter One of 'Cracks in the Sidewalk'
Hello, darling! I'm Music. Here to review for you today! Grammar: Numbness crept across her skin like a sheet of thin satin[s],[/s] ; it sent a storm of panic fluttering ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: One of the best parts about YWS!
What... are... ellipses...? Are... they........ annoying?
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: As writers, have any of you ever felt this way before?
No one's ruined my life yet, but I'm young. :) But, I somehow understand it. Haha.
Apr 2, 2009