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Re: Evil Other Woman
Mmm. Angel has a good point- the girl, hopefully, isn't obsessive about her object of affection. She could, though, every once and a while, have thoughts come in her mind ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Caveat Emptor: Part One
Hello! I'm Music. :) Grammar & Line-by-line comments: “[s]That’d[/s] That's me,” I said, “but I didn’t order anything. D’you know who sent it?" The woman shrugged[s],[/s] and glanced over
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Would you be interested in this plot?
Wow, Blink! It sounds interesting! I usually don't like this type of stuff, but... yeah! Haha. One thing I noticed: Belring + Communism + destroy the wall = Making Music ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: house 4
Oh, dear! Very short! And I haven't read any of your other chapters. Oh, well; might as well start now! :) Grammar: Lance Bold this. Being rushed to the hospital ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Belonging
Hey, Megan! I'm Music. Nice to meet you. :) Grammar: [s]No meaning[/s] Not a meaning, just a word. To some people , it's where they live, to others , it's ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: [deleted]
Removed by author.
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: It's the things you don't hear...
Hello, darling! I'm Music. Grammar: "If you don't cooperate with me , we are never going to get anywhere , you know." Like he cares. As long as he gets ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: True Intentions
Hiya, darling! Ooh, you entered? Luckily, I was not forced. :wink: Grammar: She leaned forward, her cherry red lips whispering sweet nothings , yet capturing his innocent brown eyes. Another ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
The Goonies is playing on my TV. Oh yes-sss. Haha.
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Do You Get It?
Yes is winning, because it is obviously the best answer!
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste
Ooh! I'm intrigued! Name: Camryn ["Cam"] Age: 15 DNA shared with: Great white sharks Gender: Female Appearance: Very pale skin, silky, black hair (usually in a ponytail), about 5'9, with ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: After Words: Chpt 1 (Ania) part 1
Ooh! Just reviewed the intro and was wondering when you were going to post the first chapter. Then I look, and here it is! Woo! Haha. Grammar: I felt their ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: After Words: Intro
Hello, darling! I'm Music. :) Grammar: He hurried to get the phone, but suddenly , he couldn't see. Nor could he hear, or speak, or move, or even begin to ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Food from the Past
Peeps and bugles? You people were messed up kids! *gags* I was a messed up kid, too, though. I ate raw onions. Teehee.
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
30 Days by Nevershoutnever! I love how I'm listening to a holiday song when it's not that season. :)
Apr 5, 2009