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Done with Meg's. :D

Hiya Megan! Sorry I'm a bit late- I've been very busy. :oops: Anyway, on with the review! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: My dad was coming to pick up Will and ...

Guys, please keep the requirements I've posted on the first post in mind. Thanks! Love, Music. :D

Kat's and Antigone's are done. Good pieces, both of them! Any others? *looks too eager*

Hello dear! Music here, as requested! Great job on the piece, by the way! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: My hand lay, listless and ignored , in his.

Hello darling! Music, here as requested! Let's see what I can do! *laughs maniacally and proceeds* Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I came back, in the next day’s morning.

Yayyyyy!!! Happy birthday, darling! *snugs*

I read Jig's signature for about the thousandth time. It still manages to make me smile.

Jen's is done! I'll get to Kat's as soon as I can!

Hi dear! Music, here as requested! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I whimper softly in my bed, my entire body shaking[s],[/s] ; a cold sweat settled [settles?] over my skin. Hearing ...

Kid

Hey, Ashley! I'm Music, and I'll be critiquing your work today. Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: The man just shook his head and , still ducking, headed for the safety of ...

Blade of Grass Please, sir, can you help me? For I'm just a blade of grass. I know I'm a bit small, just look at me through your glass. You ...

*dies and posts a whiny post about how dead her WRFF thread is*

But the Simon Cowell industry is much more controlling, in my opinion. He needs to find a label with artists that do stuff like him, or one completely different. He ...