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Re: Make Music happy. Give her something to review!
Fan's is done. :)
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Ink Catcher
Hello, darling! Music- here as requested! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: The boy leaning against her desk was surveying her with an arrogant look that was filled with contempt, almost as ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: I need opinions.
Hey Jon! *waves* Uhh, I had a bit of a hard time following since fantasy's not my genre, but I thought it sounded good! I think #2 sounds cooler. The ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I do love this site, and I didn't "quit", sorry if it seemed that way! You know what's funny, Dahlia? I was scrolling through my list of friends and noticed ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: American Idol
Adam's winning. End of story. Has anyone ever seen Simon give a standing ovation before? :o
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Crystalline - Chapter One, Part One
Hello, darling! I'm Music. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: What’s the use? I thought. (
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Diary Of A Teenage Disaster 1
Hiya, White! Music here. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I told him that not going on holiday effects my health because as I am a teenage girl, the rays from ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 2 of Chapter 1.
Hello, darling! Music here. :) By the way, don't forget the 2:1 ratio! 2 reviews for every 1 piece you post! :wink: Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: Dress , or top ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
I'm out, too. Sorry. I'm about to be really busy.
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste Discussion Thread
I like LD's idea. I want my character to leave, too. (If we go with the idea.)
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 1 of Chapter 1.
Hello, darling, and welcome to YWS! I'm Music, and I'd be glad to help you with anything if you're in need. :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: If only love were ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Belonging
Hiya, Megan! Here for the third round. :wink: Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: Part of me was dreading the thought of spending my Saturday in a house full of posh snobs ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Belonging
Hiya, Megan! Here for the third round. :wink: Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: Part of me was dreading the thought of spending my Saturday in a house full of posh snobs ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Wrong answer.
Hello, Meep! Nice to finally review something of yours, my darling! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: “Watch it, asshole!” Nice opening line, but could you hint at who said it? :wink: ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Taking the steps down the path - Cat's NaPo Thread
Hah! I love the ending of "Happy Poem."
Apr 7, 2009