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Hey Meg! Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: "Yes , Sophie[s].[/s] ? " I [s]said.[/s] asked.

Hiya, White! Hey- don't be shy to tell me when you post more, girl! :) Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: I need my hair cut.

What's the plan? In my last post I kind of hinted that I would help you and David (bolt) (who my character noted had strategic potential and could get out) ...

And anyone who goes next, say that David tries to escape at least three times a week. Did that for ya.

Camryn (Cam)- Great White Shark The sound of cheering partials disturbed my peaceful rest while I was submerged in my tank. I quickly rose to the top, looking for what ...

8/10. :)

MJ's is good for Cam, though. :)

Okay, MJ. Maybe they have us in a tank of water or something?

*shoves cookies at Flute* Take as long as you need, darling. I'll be patient. :)

Music like-y!

Camryn: My eyes followed the girl named Red's path to the ground as she was tranquilized. Great, that punctured her skin. I quickly prepared myself to smell blood, making sure ...

Like bolt's, my character would easily get off the island as well- she's cross-bred with a great white shark. :) I'm so excited to start!

Woo's is finished. :)

Hello, darling! Music here as requested! :D Grammar & Line-by-line Comments: ‘Go on, that’s it, all you get for your money, all you get for four pence…’ This is probably ...

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