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Re: Life After I Died (Part 1)
Thank you. I just added more and I fixed error.
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: Life After I Died (Part 1)
He held the gun to my face as I trembled with terror. He had complete control over me and he knew it. Things had got so twisted the last few ...
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Re: Magic
This story was beautiful I loved it and i felt like i was there (not in a creepy stalker way) You started it with inturige and kept that through out ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: Night Life
Hey, This story was very well written. i liked how it was suspenseful from beginning to end. i like the enthusiasm you put into the story and how it had ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: Under the surface, there is always a conflict.
I like this poem very much Everything about it just screamed "Read Me" from reading the title i was captivated and i am so glad you wrote this. Everything you ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: F*** You Inspiration
I LOVED your poem I get irritated all the time because of this very thing I loved how you made it witty and funny and I am looking forward to ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: F*** You Inspiration
i LOVED this poem I feel the same way sometimes so i understand where you are coming from I loved witty and funny it was i liked it and am ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Is he Good or Evil you decide
This is amazing. Based on the title i assumed that it would be like every other hero/villain story but it was not. It captivated the audience and sucked me in. ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Dear So Called Dad
Hey, That was some REALLY powerful writing. It gave me chills and spoke straight to my heart. I have had a semi-similar situation and i was able to feel the ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Fading Dark
I really liked your story.... it kept me on the edge of my seat and i would have never guessed the outcome. i liked the way you made him seem ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Never Been Loved
I remember when you said it Those three simple words I became that happiest person alive I didn't just have butterflies, i had birds But now, that is all gone ...
Nov 18, 2011
