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Re: Please Stay
Hello I'll be your reviewer today. Overall I loved your piece, I don't really review poems I just write them. There's one thing I noticed that you didn't really pay ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: My attempt at the poetry challenge
Day 3- you judge her by her faults She drowns herself out in the music The noise soothes the feelings she hides She laughs at the world That scorns her ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: My attempt at the poetry challenge
Day 2- A funeral of arsened hearts He ripped my heart out slowly before my eyes He watched me scream as I slowly died He never cared about the pain ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: What Inspires you?
Well it's the little things that inspire me the most like I could be sitting outside and all of a sudden it start raining then I could write a whole ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: My attempt at the poetry challenge
"Like it never stops" There's so many things I want you to know, like, when you smile, your eyes smile. I could get lost in them. There aquamarine, just like ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: One in a million
Welcome to yws first off I'm not really good at reviewing poetry. Just wanted to say maybe does not have a space between it, I didn't know if it was ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: If I ever,
:) Loved it. It's a little to short for me but thats what you were going for it seems like. I write poetry, I dont really review it but i ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: You can't be replaced, but I can be erased
I can actually feel the how he/she feels like with this one person she could be what ever this person wanted and it would never be enough for them. You ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: I met a girl Today (revised)
Love, love, love. At first I didn't understand who the girl was and I love the imagery of this poem. It has a good feel about it and I love ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Feelings I can't Ignore
Hello my name is MusicAndWritingSpeak and I'll be your reviewer today. I agree with what deirdredawne said they should be spaced out like in paragraphs sorta
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: You Judge Her By Her Faults
She drowns herself out in the music The noise soothes the feelings she hides She laughs at the world That scorns her constantly She cries blood red tears She wishes ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Dear Dreamer
Hello my name is MusicAndWritingSpeak and I'll be your reviewer today :) I really loved this poem, the repitivness didn't sound bad like it does in most poems. Keep up ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: So This Is Goodbye
Maybe I was the girl too shy to be loved I held my guard up to long You begged "Please let me in." At night I would cry because I ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Oh and here is your knife back
Can you remember the day? The day we met, the warm september breeze September needs to be capitalised swarming over the gaggle of students. Can you remeber the moment? remember ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Just another broken heart in the sand
Hey my name is MusicAndWritingSpeak and I'll be your reviewer for today That was a very sad and touching poem. I'm not really good at reviewing poems and stuff. I ...
Dec 5, 2010