Muse

Fave muse songs......uhm probably newborn, sunburn, the small print and........dead star! But i love them all..mmm, muse. Piano's not that great. It is at first, but it gets boring and ...

Yo, this is rachel. Im 15, and from Scotland (the best place in the world) My fave book is probably "The Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy" by Douglas Adams. Its ...

Im from Scotland too, way hay. Smashin stuff.

I think it's good, but yeah, expand a little. Maybe even just one more line to give it that finish it needs. Good start, just needs a bit of editing!

Smashing stuff. It flows so effortlessly it's unfair. Glittering french and vintage hugs, nice one. Keep up the good work, even though im sure you will anyway! :D

I love the last stanza, It really hits you. I love the concept, and you wrote it well. Great job, don't change anything! Well done xx

not in order... The shining, The stand (both by steven king) Holes L.O.T.R trilogy His Dark Materials 1984 Animal Farm and of course, Where the Wild things are. Best book ...

But I am a coward My bones are custard My belly is a brighter yellow Than all the sunflowers of the world combined. This is my favourite part, it brings ...

I think its a bit too long. I had to read it a few times for it to properly sink in. I love the way writing makes me feel, *sighs* ...

I dream of becoming evil Dangerous A hazard to insects Small animals And children The sawn step on the evolutionary ladder. Indulging amidst Huge purple velvety leaves, Bulging seed pods, ...

I'm on grade 6 (almost 7!) in piano, and grade 5 cello. I love playing, and i play in 3 orchestra's. Playing the flute would be really cool, but I ...

Smashing. Don't change a thing. *two thumbs up* You manage to make things flow so smoothly, which i constantly have trouble with. hmph. great work, as usual.

I like it, but, i think a longer version would maybe be better. Good subject choice, I also think about this. Good work :D !

I want to show you the scrapes that I have the cuts. the holes. but every time I touch you This bit doesn't fit well with the rest of the ...

Your eyes...they twinkle like the northern star I really like this line, but, you shouldn't use the "...." You should just make it a new line. In my opinion, It ...