Muse

I can't do hair. *edit* changed the hair, still rubbish. Do you think there is something not right with the proportions of her face?? I can't figure it out. Help. ...

very cute! You have really cool handwriting.

Definately different. knowing the second chance will make everything okay I don't think that really fits with the other stanza's. It sounds too....breezy..I think you should re-phrase it so it ...

Certainly very well written. In my honest opinion, I don't think it needs to be fixed at all. I like the length of it. Making it any shorter would ruin ...

S'mad.

I prefer the second one. It flows really well, which really suits what the poem is about..Yup, certainly very well written. Good work.

Ooh, I like it a lot. I agree with Reichieru, it is indeed very well written. I don't think it should be expanded though. I think judges would certainly be ...

^is very friendly, and gave me a fabby gift!

Hallo again! *waves*

ooh, thats cool.

what is it..?

I'm bored again. meee and my best friend, and then just boring old me. aW, cute dogs Snoink!

Whatever you do, don't use fake tan. My friend attacked me with it and my legs have never been the same since :( My arms and shoulders are looking slightly ...

too sexy for words.

I saw my new kitten today! He's 3 days old, and the size of a hamster! He's white with grey spots all over, and a stripey tail. I luff him. ...