Muse

*is confused* sounds pretty though..and yeah..what nate said. :oops:

Yeah i agree, The first stanza is tres belle! And yes, take out those elipses(?) in the last line, they aren't necessary. For someone new at poetry, you're not too ...

:shock: holy moly, this is good quality stuff. It flows so nicely, kind of just rolls off your tongue. Yummy. I liked to lie on your bed and just be ...

This is such a difficult topic to write about, and i think you did it really well. The first three stanza's are really beautiful, but i agree with Misty would ...

I'll eat poisonous berries That are all of my choice And I'll dance and run Screaming at the top of my voice I didn't like this stanza..i felt it was ...

Woweee i like it. Yeah, you can definately tell who it is. The only thing that needs changing in my opinion is the hair beside her chin/cheek. But you already ...

WoooOOOOO, they are so cool! Who cares if they were simple. I sepecially like sacred magic and...fire & ice. kooooeeel.

Yeah the snowman is brill. So festive XD. I love the expression on his face..i want to marry him....

Arvy, shh. calm down. Its ok, you will have hair like that one day *pats shoulder*

Noo, its so cool. You would really suit it like up in a messy ponytail/bun thingy, judging from your first pic. Oh and if you do cut it, just get ...

woah, *is jealous* Your hair is amazing..i want it! Hmph. :evil:

its called a tablet most likely If its not by hand, then what is it by? Feet? ha ha, clever :roll: No, what i was saying is that it looks ...

The SCOTUS (Supreme Court of the US for those Non poli sci people) has already ruled that hate speech is not free speech Oh so they are saying freedom of ...

Uhm...Huh? You coloured hand..using a computer programme? *isn't convinced*

I have my bellybutton pierced...owck. I did have my nose, but i took it out. Getting a tatoo probably. My mummy says i can have one now if i wanted ...