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This is cool. Its quirky, and really captures the moment. I like it :D

No replies..why ever not? I like this, its very easy to read. I like the imagery of the wind and eagles in the opening stanza. It creates a very distinct ...

Brilliantly raw. There is no fussing around, its straight to the point and i LOVE it for it. I read the story behind it on your blog, but even if ...

Its better than my first poem, I'll tell you that. You've chosen a very safe structure, which should be re-thought. It creates a flatness which takes away from the meaning ...

This is interesting. Im not sure i understand it though it must be said. First off, great imagery. It creates an almost uncomfortable tension which i love in poems. I ...

Thanks Piranha, im glad you liked it! Yeah, i did think about using the scientific name, but i wasn't sure if that would perhaps make it too obvious that it ...

Mesh- That is SO COOL. I'd love to go to Rome. You and your friend both look really nice. Gwen- Of course you're pretty! You wouldn't post so many pictures ...

hahaha I LOVE THE BUCKET ONE.

Lol, its a spoof. I wish it wasn't though. "And finally, a genuine spoof. Have you heard the one about the penguins that can fly? A BBC camera crew filming ...

Hi, my name is Lesley. I dont really have time to chat, Alex has lost his guinea pig again....ALICE MUMMY CANT HELP RIGHT NOW, SHE'S BUSY. Sorry, what were you ...

Man, this thread is making me feel all nostalgic. I LOVED the storybooks, they were amazing. It was the first time i realised that other people my age were into ...

That is GORGEOUS. I really like this. I want to learn how to do that!! Well done x

These are amazing. The photograph is really pretty, i wish i could do that without editing! x

OMG JETSONS FTW!!! Yessss ok, thats just a blatant me shot. but im WELL bored, and the jetsons do in fact rule.