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Re: Flight of the Dove - Prologue
This was good at drawing me in, but I understand your worry of it becoming too cliché. The trouble is, if like you mentioned you plan to do two Pov's ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Summer
A little bit of happiness
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Squirrel and Flowers
Hey there! Wow, these are fighteningly big! Of the ones I can see it looks like you've got some real talent but you need to do yourself justice in posting ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
What a great story! No... great doesn't really seem to cover it. What's the word I'm looking for?? Ah, there it it - awesome! Although a ludicrous tale and strangely ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Touchless
The trouble with fantasy is that you often run the risk of sounding cliché. All mistakes have been pointed out here by Icy and Octave's provided a great explanation of ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: I'm sure (revised)
I'm no good at poetry, so won't comment on structure and form etc. But I think that I preferred the original version. It seemed to fit better even though those ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies Cover entry
Recently, IcyFlame wrote a pretty amazing book that she named 'Dreams Tell Lies'. Now, she wants a cover that's as epic as her book! The book has its own club ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Waves of Fire
I'm not much of a poet myself - and you say that's the same case for you but I will say I thought this was really good! Icy's pointed out ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Flowers in France
I know you can see a face in it :smt003
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Five
This was really awesome! It came up on the features and I'm truly glad that it did or I wouln't have discovered it. I love the conversation between her and ...
Mar 19, 2011
