Mortality

This is really cool, i cant read the signature at the end but other then that its really awesome. It would make me want to join YWS, if i saw ...

This was funny. I think it was flawless and very nicely written until this part. Stanza by stanza, line by line, And so she wrote her poem, row by row. ...

Hey, i really like your writing, keep it up. The lyrics were very good, and it just really stands out(good thing!) Any and all problems have been mentioned by everyone ...

I need someone to hold me. And that someone ain't there, (I think you should use "isn't" instead of ain't." ain't just kinda ruins the flow) Other then that i ...

Its really very good, but slightly too messy? So messy its distracting, also its too dark. Good job thou, its very nice.

Rawr. lol She looks very scary. I wouldn't mess with her! Very nice job, the hair looks great. Random kitty face? meh, whatever. Its still good!

He has a short neck? I don't know, just trying to find a problem with it. Seams perfect to me. Very cool, i like the gun,lol.

Well since this was posted on April 1st, its pretty obvious its a joke. Although the talking egg was very cool,lol, if you serious ed this up it would still ...

Love is part of family and we move on We need their love to feel strong ______________________________ This part, the first and second line don't rhyme or flow very well. ...

I agree with Kenpachi. I read it and it didn't flow for me at all. Sudden stops, awkward words is what made it not flow well. Just an end to ...

First one is beautifully. The background, and the dog is just awesome. The second is exceptional, really shows the beauty of nature. The third, was good considering the camera and ...

Thats very cool, very unique and very uncommon. The lighting is awesome, and as random as it is,lol, it just looks like very accidental. Nice job, hope to see some ...

I really like photography, and i love your style. Their all very good, i didn't really like the first one, looked kind of random. The bamboo is my favorite, its ...

Hello Alice! I acutally liked it! It was very good, and pretty deep. I hope you write some more!

You gotta love Squidward! Very nice and it looks just like him.