MoriartyIsReal

Thank you so much for this review! I'm not getting you wrong at all - I actually do see sense in where you are coming from. I think I agree ...

Thank you so much for this review! I'm not getting you wrong at all - I actually do see sense in where you are coming from. I think I agree ...

Thank you so much for this review! I'm not getting you wrong at all - I actually do see sense in where you are coming from. I think I agree ...

Wow, I don't think I can really thank you enough for picking my writing apart as you did (in a good way, of course). It is definitely going to help ...

Okay, sorry for that spam. x.x My connection is being a right pain, and as I probably made clear in my review, I was in a rush. So sorry about ...

Thank you so much for this review! It's really opened my eyes to tenses, and hopefully I won't be making the same mistakes twice now. ^^ I've edited the story ...