Moony

Many uncountable moons have past since the great journey, and the clans nolonger live by the lake. Their once great lake home dried up seasons after their arrival, for the ...

I have made the story, it is in the other fiction part. it is not qiute done yet.

um... I liked the idea of the story, I liked the names of your characters but... your grammer is horrible! alot of your words are missing some letters like me ...

I'm writing this story through a childs perspective, thats why it sounds like this. She is saying as a teen now to someone, I guess like a therapist(I think this ...

(*AAAAAAAWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEE*) i absolutely enjoyed this if I was a real crit, I'd give it three thumbs up(*tee-hee*) we don't have three thumbs)

um... can go ahead and just make my character, or is it to late

hi! guess what... its Featherclaw13!!! (*OoooHhhhh*) loved the story, buuut, it was to much like erin hunter's, to much drama going on in the story at once, you should keep ...

hum... alot of you say that my poem was great and then there are the ones who say it dragged, it didn't grab their attention, or something else like that ...

hey guys thanks for commenting on this! i finally got a chance to edit the problems and make it longer!! hope you like this and please if it needs something ...

yeah I agree with the first two people arent these people supposed to be 13 and 14 I mean they are only 2grades ahead of me I know 9th graders ...

this was very good but i have never seen the movie the brothers grimm soory

this is in the process of editing -really sorry

i am a harry potter freak i just couldnt get enough of him i hope you continue to write this series!!!!

ok, morgan le fay was merlins baby sister (as written in my story) she has often been said to be a evil witch (in my case i have changed that) ...

this was very very bad i'm sorry but thats my opinion its really rather grose