Moony

hrmmm.... well your description of the room is perfect. but... more description on the baby is needed and maybe using he rather than the old man while talking about him. ...

i am editing it right now!

I stand here with you, our hands touch in sweet favor. Our eyes meet ice with mud, this is something I just wanna savor. Never before have I felt this ...

Sorry guys but I did rush through this last night si I could get some sleep. I am going to edit this and add stuff though.

(*is being edited*)

hmmmm.... so many reviews.... wow....

Oh My Gosh! I' not really into this kind of music but it is so awesome! The lyrics are perfect with everything! I wonder what it would sound like it ...

PROLGOGUE A beautiful silver she-cat walked through the seemingly unmoving forest, three other cats coming from behind her. There pelts glowing and shimmering with silver. "Moonstar, it is time", call

um... I am making the stories Razor

Name: Briar Mallory Lenox Age: 17 Description of appearance: Skin- Briar's skin is coloured like ivory Eyes- Briar was blinded at a young age from illness, she now depends on ...

thank you for commenting on this :D Kaatiie- I cant wait for you to read the story either and I am glad you like the new clan names! Firearris- And ...

Once again dw you amaze me with your writing and description. WOW! I love this so much, so much emmotion goes down into this dw! Your awesome at your writing ...

All I can say dw is well... WOW!!! Your writing is amazing! I really love it when people actually write about what really goes on behind closed doors to others, ...

okay thanks guys, i will definatly edit this soon but i'm kinda busy. but thanks for your reviews

well it is supposed tobe about the school shootings, but yeah i'm making a story now, so i hope everyone likes it