Moonglowe

I love the second one. It's got darker lines, and the pupil looks more real because it's darker. The first one is amazing too, though.

This. is. absolutely. AMAZING. I'm wowed. Love the detail.

Hi! This seems like a very nice start to a story. I love pieces like that. I'm also obsessed with fantasy. I liked the characters, and the theme very much. ...

Hi guys! This is my first work ever posted, and the very first book I ever tried to write. I'd like some reviews. Please correct any errors you see, but ...

Oh. Wow. This is Absolutely AMAZING. I can't find words enough to describe it. Its... so... intensely mesmerizing. I couldn't stop reading. Wow. I like the slight linger of mystery ...

I fell out of my chair, I was cracking up so hard. I love the parts where Bella declares herself clumsy and something falls on her.... :lol: Its GREAT

The story is a little too rushed to create enough suspense. Take it slowly, stretch it out, make a cliff hanger out of it. The last sentence.... put some feeling ...

Pretty good! A few comments though: The story feels a little rushed, like you were really hurrying and under pressure to get it done fast. Also, the teacher is a ...

Pretty good! A few comments though: The story feels a little rushed, like you were really hurrying and under pressure to get it done fast. Also, the teacher is a ...

The story seems like a really awesome read. I love stories like this. Its got a nice hint of suspense and action to it, and even from the first chapter ...

Hi, I'm new here. I'm Moonglowe, and yes, its misspelled on purpose. English isn't my first language, but I love to read and write, so please be patient with me... ...