Moonglowe

Awesome - but as so many have already said, here are a couple of things you should change: -add more scales - a couple of clusters here and there to ...

Wow, this is really amazing. Keep up the good work :) Love the stunning, simple way in which you describe everything.

Great story, I love the descriptions. But one thing - the last sentence seeks kinda' stiff and essay-like. It doesn't seem to fit with the story...

Character for story. Aatu. using photoshop cs4.

Wow. This is really, really good. I love the ending a lot - it's very full of feeling. I really can't wait to read more - I'm very interested in ...

Very nice photo :) However, it's true that the scattered petals look a little too.. arranged, not careless enough. In nature, they would be all over the place because of ...

Wow, this is a really nice drawing. :) A couple of suggestions though: Eyes: They're a little too close together, and a trifle too big. If the character is happy ...

This is Shilo - the young, double-life girl who captured my heart from the moment I imagined her. To everyone she knows, she is respectable Miss Shilo Mayth an interior ...

This is a really nice, funny piece - it made me laugh, because it sounds a lot like what... someone I know would do. I like the voice of your ...

Its a nice picture concept... But if you would like to improve your future photos, here are some suggestions: -If possible, take it with a digital camera - the quality ...

Here's my wolf... took me a little while to draw... Using The Gimp software.

Wow. This is REALLY good. But, as someone said before, you should add more info about the setting of the story. It's an excellent piece though, it draws in a ...

Through the Eyes you can see the Heart and Soul of all creatures – even Humans. Be sure to look deep into the eyes of Mankind. The calm, sapphire water ...

I step aside, I watch you cry. My soul is torn apart. I want to stop the pain you feel. I want to soothe your aching heart. You push me ...

Hey, Thanks you guys for all the good tips and criticism, it really helped. Right now I am editing the introduction and the 1st chapter - both will be available ...