Moonclaw_Warrior_of_Night

I like it. You used some of the names from Warriors. ex. Mudfur, Redtail. But you added two suffex (dog and pup). That was good. Also There was lots of ...

You've captured my heart today. Even though you don't feel the same way. I wish you were beside me. Without you, I will cease to be. I'm fighting a losing ...

“Jynara. Jynara. Jynara,” strange words flowed through my head. I opened my eyes and saw a sea of black over my head. A sea of black with tiny pinpricks of ...

[pre]FWOOSHHHHH! The harpoon flew past him, close enough for him to see the individual barbs. He knew the next time he wouldn’t see the long wooden handle buried in the ...

Deep within the heart, a soul is stirring. Deep within the heart, a fire is burning. What may now be a tiny flame. May one day be an intese blaze. ...

Proluge A screech of pain ripped through the cool night air. “Wintermoon! Wintermoon! Come quickly Shrewtail is having kits,” a cat cried. “Calm down Twilightstripe, I’m coming,” Wintermoon

NIGHT CLAN Leader Snowleaf-small white she-cat with one orange paw and bright yellow eyes Deputy Goldtail-black tom with a golden tail tip and ice blue eyes Medicine Cat Wintermoon-gray tom ...

I can do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The mighty hunter stalks the wood. Her steps quick and light. Blending in perfectly like a patch of moonlit forest floor. Her ears like radars pick-up a small sound. A ...

In the shadows, watching, trembling, and waiting. Eyes not dark with evil, bloodlust, or rage, eyes sad and lonly. No one loves. No one cares. All because of father. My ...

I agree with Nyconz421 the poem should be longer but other than that this poem is on of your best.

In my view this is on of you better poems. But I do agree this poem would have a much deeper message if you could take the rhyming away.