Moo

Hi there, I'll be taking a look at your work. I'm Moo by the way. I can make anything happen with them. They can fly; become invisible; move objects without ...

Strangely, my life did not alter much after discovering Chris's secret. The only thing that changed was Chris refused to see me after the sun went down, he said because ...

Hi there! :D I'd just like to say I thought this story was really good, and you did an excellent job. I like how you take the reader into the ...

I apoligize about the short post :oops: Hope you enjoy anyway. -- Chris was a lot calmer by the time we strolled down the footpath, towards the small development of ...

Greetings! I quite like this, but some of the lines disrupted the rhythm and made at a little difficult to read. What about, "Will it not cease?" on it's own? ...

I kept calling relentlessly. The first three times, his mum answered saying he was sick and didn't want to talk. Then they stopped answering, and I decided to sneak out ...

Hey anti-pop! When I read this, I wasn't sure what to expect. I read the first few stanzas, and I thought this was going to be a really sad poem ...

Hey Prospekt! Angel up above me there pretty much covered it all, but I'm going to waffle on anyway. ;) Your poem was so beautiful, and I admit my eyes ...

My brother had quickly dispatched me from the room, saying that I was such a sissy and not to come back in if I was going to holler like that ...

Someone once told me while ago, that I had a trait of seeing things for what they really are, and always picking on the fine details. Which, I suppose, is ...

My golden, little Yellowhammer, Singing gracefully from the hedge, Don’t let the sound of a danger Fill your song with dread! Sing to me your repertoire, As you tilt your ...

Err, hello black sheep. *secretly knows who you really are* I'm not sure I want a pat of wisdom :lol:

Hi T-bird! *waves* Hello Whisper! :P

Hey Whisper! :D This writing is excellent. You write the third person perspective very well, and I think that was appropriate for this story. I love how the beginning is ...

Greetings, Prospekt! This poem is wonderful, and very moving. There is a lot of feeling put into this one, and I think this is important so that the reader can ...