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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Venom

    Hey there Hayden, Moo here at your service with a review. Seeing as no one has really nitpicked this or pointed out some of the more obvious flaws, I'm going ...

    May 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Freedom Is To Breathe

    Hey there. I saw you were in desperate need of reviews, so I decided to help out. So I'll start with a general impression before I get down to the ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Blood on Hellibo (Part 1)

    Hey there Yoda. Not a bad effort at all with this piece. I'm going to be more general with this review, rather than nitpick. Hopefully the others will pick up ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Help me name some businesses!

    I agree with Rosey in that I don't think it's particularly important to name businesses. However, if there's a café for example that is a big part of the plot, ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Research Archives Re: Heart disease

    This will sound hideously picky, but it does have a purpose in the story. xD A character in a potential novella I've been planning has some sort of heart disease, ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: I'm Getting Published!!

    Congrats, you!

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Any pokemon battlers out there?

    5th Gen has yet to be released (Next Friday for Europe, woot!) So I'm still playing Gen IV as well. :3 Shame you've lost interest. D:

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Any pokemon battlers out there?

    I'm talking about the games for the DS/Wii. o.o

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Vampire

    Hey there. :D This is not Bram Stoker's Dracula and most definitely not Joss Wieden's Buffy The Vampire Slayer. This is a story of There's a couple of problems with ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Any pokemon battlers out there?

    I've recently gone pokemon mad again after entering the world of competitive play. Does anyone else in YWS play online? If so, enlist your interest here, and we could possibly ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Character Personality [Question]

    How do you guys figure out character personalities? Sometimes it's something I have no trouble with and others I find it more difficult. I'm having this problem at the moment ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Purple Shirted Annoyance

    Hey Coral. I'm Moo, and I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. ;) I'll start with the good parts. There didn't seem to have many mistakes grammatically and I ...

    Dec 9, 2010
  • Research Re: Irish Culture Research

    First off, is the story set in the Republic or Northern Ireland? I don't mean to be calling you ignorant, but I've met many people who don't actually know that ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Username Derivations

    I just... like cows? xD Actually, I farm and own my own livestock, and I swear it was the proudest moment of my life when I got my first calf. ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Common Cliches?

    Okay. This one is pretty overdone. Not to mention it makes me feel ill ;) Girl meets boy. Boy hates girl. Eventually they are forced together by their unforgiving author. ...

    Nov 24, 2010


A true poet does not bother to be poetical. Nor does a nursery gardener scent his roses.
— Jean Cocteau